two very old poems

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so yesterday i unearthed, among other things, two short poems dated way back to when i was 9 years old—they were written inside an old 4th grade journal and everything, nestled between pages of arithmetic homework. i thought they were an…interesting glimpse into the machinations of my tiny noggin, so i’m posting ‘em here. note that no corrections were made to spelling, grammar, form, etc.


1. [untitled] - march 7th, 2007

Every move and gesture
Every breath of air
is full of grace
Every jump, every twirl
Every whisper of hair
is full of grace
Every grin of snow capped teeth
Every look you share with me
is full of grace
Your soft, luminescent eyes
Your voice, rarely spoken
Is full of grace


2. [“Numb”] - june 28th, 2007

They say that frostbite numbs 
the hands
Forced to abandon the images
tenderly crafted
Sought out summer in a winter blizzard
Found inhumanity of true ice—not 
crystalized, but dusted pure
And still an evil and potent 
bunch—that killing dusted ice
None of which bare signs of 
warmth or brazen green
Silence of the numbness as it
begins to flood
But then the drip, drip, drip of
liquid frost
My blood begins to burn

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