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so yesterday i unearthed, among other things, two short poems dated way back to when i was 9 years old—they were written inside an old 4th grade journal and everything, nestled between pages of arithmetic homework. i thought they were an…interesting glimpse into the machinations of my tiny noggin, so i’m posting ‘em here. note that no corrections were made to spelling, grammar, form, etc.
1. [untitled] - march 7th, 2007
Every move and gesture
Every breath of air
Every breath of air
is full of grace
Every jump, every twirl
Every whisper of hair
is full of grace
Every grin of snow capped teeth
Every look you share with me
is full of grace
Your soft, luminescent eyes
Your voice, rarely spoken
Is full of grace
2. [“Numb”] - june 28th, 2007
They say that frostbite numbs
the hands
Forced to abandon the images
tenderly crafted
Sought out summer in a winter blizzard
Found inhumanity of true ice—not
crystalized, but dusted pure
And still an evil and potent
bunch—that killing dusted ice
None of which bare signs of
warmth or brazen green
Silence of the numbness as it
begins to flood
But then the drip, drip, drip of
liquid frost
My blood begins to burn
change is scaaaaaaaary
well folks, i've finally done it. over five years after joining this godforsaken website, as a twelve-year-old obsessed with e. e. cummings and bad anime (rather than the eighteen-year-old obsessed with e. e. cummings and bad anime that i am now)―i've changed my icon. i've just finished with my first semester of college, accomplished a whole bunch of wonderful bullshit, and it just...felt right.
so goodbye, hyperactive yellow person.
you will be missed.
it's occasionally sunny in new york
i seriously need to leave my dorm room before the cabin fever hits. but...there are so many human beings out there. what the fuck. what the fuck.
//i've been in college for two days, now. am i an adult yet? and for that matter, where's my complimentary midlife crisis at?
self-ish
i think that, for the first time in a very long time, i'm legitimately "happy" to be a person...whatever the fuck that's supposed to mean. but it's nice. it doesn't make my general sense of feeling any less shitty, but accepting the personhood of my experiences is definitely a step towards something or other.
characterization marches on, i guess.
also, check it:
whuh...?
i check back for the first time in about a week and i've got over 200 fucking feedback messages??? and a bunch of submission requests??
th' fuck, guys? i was about to take a nap. :/
(nah but seriously, thanks. idk what any of this is for yet, but i'll go out on a limb and assume i'm not just beeing spammed with hate mail <3)
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