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veil zero

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who you dream when you sleep,
and for which ways would you wake?
now open that door, and let in that dark
(quiet as a slip or a slouch)
from the sinking ships that no one sees.

and come hither; with a fuse and a fuss
almost anything can be unmade.
oh, but what of this bad blood begs to water―
see, those grey-gutted rivers which b(l)urry my night
are always sweetest in the thick of a loss.
this was the original first part of my "forty veils/as many whacks" series (which is approx. halfway done and yet to be posted) that i ended up discarding because the writing itself is so sub par. but hey, you know what they say about humble beginnings.

anyway, i don't want to give much away about the project itself, but: it's basically 40 ten-line poems, or one 400 line poem depending on how you wanna look at it. progress is slow for a variety of reasons, so idk when they whole thing will be posted. but i guess, thematically speaking, you could consider this a sneak-preview of sorts!
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