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so yesterday i unearthed, among other things, two short poems dated way back to when i was 9 years old—they were written inside an old 4th grade journal and everything, nestled between pages of arithmetic homework. i thought they were an…interesting glimpse into the machinations of my tiny noggin, so i’m posting ‘em here. note that no corrections were made to spelling, grammar, form, etc.

1. [untitled] - march 7th, 2007

Every move and gesture
Every breath of air
is full of grace
Every jump, every twirl
Every whisper of hair
is full of grace
Every grin of snow capped teeth
Every look you share with me
is full of grace
Your soft, luminescent eyes
Your voice, rarely spoken
Is full of grace

2. [“Numb”] - june 28th, 2007

They say that frostbite numbs 
the hands
Forced to abandon the images
tenderly crafted
Sought out summer in a winter blizzard
Found inhumanity of true ice—not 
crystalized, but dusted pure
And still an evil and potent 
bunch—that killing dusted ice
None of which bare signs of 
warmth or brazen green
Silence of the numbness as it
begins to flood
But then the drip, drip, drip of
liquid frost
My blood begins to burn

  • Mood: Content
  • Listening to: tricot - "bitter"
  • Reading: the familiar


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[pictured above at age twelve. no filter.]

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Coyote-Pro Featured By Owner Edited Nov 14, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist
Happy Bday!!! I am a dummy! 
I was gonna make you something but I wasn't sure what you would like x)
*hands you funnel cake*
MindlessThinker Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015   Writer
yay, funnel cake! :happybounce: thanks bro.
TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015
A happy birthday to ya! :happy birthday: 
MindlessThinker Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015   Writer
thankya! balloon  
AnuPdin Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015
So you are from Antarctica?
Awesome stuff btw
MindlessThinker Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015   Writer
thanks dude. and i'm from...somewhere. :shrug: your guess is as good as mine, i don't pay much attention to that stuff.
0becomingX Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks for the favorites :)
fleetofgypsies Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for faving collages... it is your (and others)_ ongoing support that makes me want to do more.. love, fog.
MindlessThinker Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014   Writer
no problem!! you're one of my favorite artists here, thank you for continuing to create! (p.s. sorry i don't really comment....i'm shy and tend to fave-and-run even when i really like things. it's a bad habit.)
fleetofgypsies Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:thumbsup: :heart:  :sprint:
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